Hey I just started playing the game and I have a question about the clearance system. Its based off of the greek alphabet right? If so is it supposed to go alphabetically with each letter being lower down the alphabet being a higher rank? If so Σ should be between Λ and Ψ as in the greek alphabet thats its position.
Maybe an odd question to ask, but is there any sort of expansion elements in the story? This VN got added to another Itch users' expansion game playlist. I've been enjoying the story, but it's been burning in the back of my mind. There's a render of Astoria in the game page here that makes her look like she has ultra-thick thighs, but I don't know if she always has those and we just don't see them in Chapter 1 because she's behind the desk during the interview.
Also a quick bug report: On your first mission in the city when you have a chance to intervene in Lily's attack, the choices are still in Cyrillic instead of English.
This game is incredible bro . I fell in love with the story and i just started playing. Also love ur sense of humor dev. I shit my pants when the game said my name lol
About half way into the game, not much of a visual novel guy but honestly better than expected, came for a nut but i actually got pretty invested into the game. Great job developer!!
The absolute worst game I ever tried. The story is so stupid and convoluted. The author doesn't have a clue what he's writing: action, lewd, horror, sci-fi, fantasy... If the only fiction you ever consumed was bad Chuck Norris movies, you still should be able to come up with something less dumb than this one. It's all over the place with no logic whatsoever. The s3x scenes are unnatural, they don't follow at all from the conversations. And they look bad, the environment is too dark overall.
no compaired to alot of these games and lets just say i have alot since i have almost 3T of these type of games you actually have a great story. people like sinoza just want to fap and thats it, ive seen him on other pages that dont have fap scenes every 3 minutes complaining to but the ones with the scenes he never once complains just gives propes and half the time the story is shit and boring.. you actually have a nice story.
It's funny you've seen my account on other pages since this was the very first time I actually made an account with the intention to leave a comment. The best games are the ones that have a really good story. Eternum, Hail Dicktator, Sisterly Lust (bad game to play because it's old and has no animations, but the story is good), Isekai Paradise, Pale Carnations, Ripples - just to give some examples of really good games.
ngl the writing at the beginning of chapter 4 is very rough, who is talking to who? The characters cut each other off and start new sentences and they don't flow into each other. Its like an ai wrote all of this tbh.
Hey just stumbled upon your game, and have to say I haven't been so immersed in a VN in a long time. The story telling is phenomenal and seeing everything unravel in a deep, intricate plot is something I personally love. Maybe it's a lack of experience from me not playing enough games in the genre, but hearing such immersive audio and a switch from a story perspective to a short video is something I found interesting and unique. One very small issue I had was in certain parts of the english gameplay, a couple of text were shown in russian or didn't show up at all. Not sure if this was intentional or if my device is acting up. Overall amazing story and can't wait for the next update!
Without bothering you, I was finding myself into some bug like : "An exeption has occurred" in the story. To be specific, they are several errors like : "NameError : 'mc_knowledge' is not defined"
It can break the immersion sometimes, but appart from that, I like this AVN
This is a pretty interesting game, im really not a fan of the wife though. Kinda hoping she dies and MC can live on with someone else.
since the patreon is dead and "adult" discords cannot be joined from the UK is there any progress on the next part? im hoping the missing patreon doesnt mean its another abandoned game, would like to see how it plays out.
In terms of the story, this can't be regarded as a very creative and interesting script. It's even a bit cliché. You know, love, lies, patience, and pain. Although I'm a pure love fan, I also enjoy experiencing a reasonable harem in games. Regarding this, I'd like to praise "Eternal". If a harem in a game makes you feel painful, it's wrong. In reality, it's like this, so there's hardly an ideal harem in real life. But if a game presents this concept, it should be ideal. Leaving aside these, the art design, animation smoothness, and soundtrack are all quite good. It can be ranked among the top of the numerous works I've played. If I have to evaluate this work, it's simply to continue and tell this story well. Those who like it will love it very much, but those who don't won't even give it 2.5 points (out of 5). But objectively speaking, this work is almost among the best I've played. The animation creativity is quite good, it's just not to everyone's taste. Keep it up!
It's highly commendable that the author updates very frequently!
In the new versions, you can ask if you can remove your wife and make her his sister instead. I just don't want to develop a relationship with Laura. I want to ignore her and not develop a relationship with her at all.
Just stayed up all night playing your game and I am really hoping that choosing to go after your wife or the elf check endings when the credits play are not the actual endings of a game currently I really want more of a story because it has me absolutely hooked even if a lot of the female characters are absolute b****** and I would love nothing more for the option to curb stomp some of them but regardless I still very much like the story and I very much hope you continue producing such visually stunning games and the storyline is very unique 8.5/10 so far I dislike how little is actually explained though it's a bit annoying to have basically apocalyptic level events happening on the surface of the planet we're on and everybody is basically saying oh we can't tell you cuz your mind is going to break otherwise if that's even the reason
Before anything, I’m not a good reviewer or writer, but I liked the game a lot. I played it all in one day and just wanted to help the community and appreciate the dev’s talent.
sorry if i make the game worse with this review, i would appreciate if anyone could review my review
Okay lets go... v0.3.5
The game is in development and is being carefully made, which is a really good sign, especially because the dev is actually listening to the community. Still, I’d like to talk about some flaws and positives.
The visuals are great. Honey Select 2 is a really good base for games like this, and the renderings are nice and smooth, especially considering the dev probably isn’t working with a high-end PC big team. Pretty good for the current scene standard in 2025, nothing to complain about here.
The soundtrack is fantastic. Games with this amount of music and sound effects for every scene make the immersion really strong. Great choices for the right moments.
Now let’s wrap it up.
(Contains mild spoilers)
The writing has a few issues that, given the quality of the renders and soundtrack, I honestly didn’t expect.
First, Olivia’s hair changes color for a while after the protagonist’s coma—from black to light brown, then back to black again. I know this isn’t a priority right now since fixing it would take time that could be better spent progressing the story, so that’s fine. I’m just mentioning it because it breaks a bit of consistency, even if it’s just a rendering issue.
When writing a story with a mysterious tone, it’s important to tread carefully. You can easily overuse mystery or fail to create real tension. In this visual novel, I think it’s slightly overused—not a big deal, though. You can really feel the protagonist’s point of view: he doesn’t know much and feels weak for the mission he’s carrying, which works well. But when some of the mysteries start to reveal themselves, the earlier tension doesn’t linger as strongly as it could.
The russian choice: the 10th choice in the game is in russian, please correct it.
If I had to give it a score based on my experience with around forty games, I’d say 9.2 out of 10.
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Hey I just started playing the game and I have a question about the clearance system. Its based off of the greek alphabet right? If so is it supposed to go alphabetically with each letter being lower down the alphabet being a higher rank? If so Σ should be between Λ and Ψ as in the greek alphabet thats its position.
why android cant download the game
Maybe an odd question to ask, but is there any sort of expansion elements in the story? This VN got added to another Itch users' expansion game playlist. I've been enjoying the story, but it's been burning in the back of my mind. There's a render of Astoria in the game page here that makes her look like she has ultra-thick thighs, but I don't know if she always has those and we just don't see them in Chapter 1 because she's behind the desk during the interview.
Also a quick bug report: On your first mission in the city when you have a chance to intervene in Lily's attack, the choices are still in Cyrillic instead of English.
This game is incredible bro . I fell in love with the story and i just started playing. Also love ur sense of humor dev. I shit my pants when the game said my name lol
Ps: make a playlist of the soundtrack, its fire
i want japanese type gmaes
About half way into the game, not much of a visual novel guy but honestly better than expected, came for a nut but i actually got pretty invested into the game. Great job developer!!
Hmm 🧐 may wish too rewrite that sentence. Came for a Nut? 😝 🥜 🥜
How far do I have to go in for the actual like, lewd shit?
i need the music in my playlist
The absolute worst game I ever tried. The story is so stupid and convoluted. The author doesn't have a clue what he's writing: action, lewd, horror, sci-fi, fantasy... If the only fiction you ever consumed was bad Chuck Norris movies, you still should be able to come up with something less dumb than this one. It's all over the place with no logic whatsoever. The s3x scenes are unnatural, they don't follow at all from the conversations. And they look bad, the environment is too dark overall.
The story is pretty straightforward ngl. This sounds like a you problem
Thank you for opinion :D
Overall, I can agree, my story can be confused, but story it's very common and simple. But anyway, seems like this story not for everyone. :)
no compaired to alot of these games and lets just say i have alot since i have almost 3T of these type of games you actually have a great story. people like sinoza just want to fap and thats it, ive seen him on other pages that dont have fap scenes every 3 minutes complaining to but the ones with the scenes he never once complains just gives propes and half the time the story is shit and boring.. you actually have a nice story.
It's funny you've seen my account on other pages since this was the very first time I actually made an account with the intention to leave a comment. The best games are the ones that have a really good story. Eternum, Hail Dicktator, Sisterly Lust (bad game to play because it's old and has no animations, but the story is good), Isekai Paradise, Pale Carnations, Ripples - just to give some examples of really good games.
Lovely, will add later other choice.
? thats a weird way to say you dont like the game. imagine you quit a job because you dont like someone who works there. weird as hell
What's wrong with her? I' might play this game so I want to know if it's worth dumping hours into reading
Which of the files should I download GD, GoFile or Mega ?
They all the same, so just use one which you prefer.
Why is there no Chinese in version 0.4 now?Will there be Chinese in the future?
I need translator for this. If i found someone than sure, if not... well, than no xD
The PC zip on the GD says "quota has been reached for this file" so we can't download it
Will upload to another platform
I Have Drama about this
GOAT
ngl the writing at the beginning of chapter 4 is very rough, who is talking to who? The characters cut each other off and start new sentences and they don't flow into each other. Its like an ai wrote all of this tbh.
It is, how it is. Thx for your opinion :D
I downloaded the 0.4 version but after having played 0.3.5 it doesn't 'play' the new version after the 3.5 credits?
Decide to continue first choice. Elf choice (Miriel) will be in the future update.
Ah ok sorry I may have forgot that there was an impactful choice before, well I will gladly wait. It still is an amazing game!
LETS FUCKING GOOOOOO
Do you plan to add Spanish?
Yes, if I found Spanish trasnlator
wow,its a very nice game.
Hey just stumbled upon your game, and have to say I haven't been so immersed in a VN in a long time. The story telling is phenomenal and seeing everything unravel in a deep, intricate plot is something I personally love. Maybe it's a lack of experience from me not playing enough games in the genre, but hearing such immersive audio and a switch from a story perspective to a short video is something I found interesting and unique. One very small issue I had was in certain parts of the english gameplay, a couple of text were shown in russian or didn't show up at all. Not sure if this was intentional or if my device is acting up. Overall amazing story and can't wait for the next update!
Serait il possible de traduire le jeux en français svp 😊
PC无法下载
Without bothering you, I was finding myself into some bug like : "An exeption has occurred" in the story. To be specific, they are several errors like : "NameError : 'mc_knowledge' is not defined"
It can break the immersion sometimes, but appart from that, I like this AVN
I hope the story will continue!
你好，这个有中文吗？
很明显有的
真的假的，你玩过了吗？
i came from clow now i am here for ROUND 2
This is a pretty interesting game, im really not a fan of the wife though. Kinda hoping she dies and MC can live on with someone else.
since the patreon is dead and "adult" discords cannot be joined from the UK is there any progress on the next part? im hoping the missing patreon doesnt mean its another abandoned game, would like to see how it plays out.
Is there harem route?
yes, it says harem in the tags if you press on the tab 'more information'
In terms of the story, this can't be regarded as a very creative and interesting script. It's even a bit cliché. You know, love, lies, patience, and pain. Although I'm a pure love fan, I also enjoy experiencing a reasonable harem in games. Regarding this, I'd like to praise "Eternal". If a harem in a game makes you feel painful, it's wrong. In reality, it's like this, so there's hardly an ideal harem in real life. But if a game presents this concept, it should be ideal. Leaving aside these, the art design, animation smoothness, and soundtrack are all quite good. It can be ranked among the top of the numerous works I've played. If I have to evaluate this work, it's simply to continue and tell this story well. Those who like it will love it very much, but those who don't won't even give it 2.5 points (out of 5). But objectively speaking, this work is almost among the best I've played. The animation creativity is quite good, it's just not to everyone's taste. Keep it up!
It's highly commendable that the author updates very frequently!
I can't find the game "eternal" u mentioned
Eternum* highly recommend
What should I do to get a relationship with Kallestra, which I really like, or will it only be available in new versions?
In the new versions, you can ask if you can remove your wife and make her his sister instead. I just don't want to develop a relationship with Laura. I want to ignore her and not develop a relationship with her at all.
Hi, I just finished playing this game, and I really enjoyed it.
No shit Sherlock because it's Visual Novel, Idk if ya rage bait but it suck :d.
Just stayed up all night playing your game and I am really hoping that choosing to go after your wife or the elf check endings when the credits play are not the actual endings of a game currently I really want more of a story because it has me absolutely hooked even if a lot of the female characters are absolute b****** and I would love nothing more for the option to curb stomp some of them but regardless I still very much like the story and I very much hope you continue producing such visually stunning games and the storyline is very unique 8.5/10 so far I dislike how little is actually explained though it's a bit annoying to have basically apocalyptic level events happening on the surface of the planet we're on and everybody is basically saying oh we can't tell you cuz your mind is going to break otherwise if that's even the reason
Your Patreon link isn’t working.
Before anything, I’m not a good reviewer or writer, but I liked the game a lot. I played it all in one day and just wanted to help the community and appreciate the dev’s talent.
sorry if i make the game worse with this review, i would appreciate if anyone could review my review
Okay lets go... v0.3.5
The game is in development and is being carefully made, which is a really good sign, especially because the dev is actually listening to the community. Still, I’d like to talk about some flaws and positives.
The visuals are great. Honey Select 2 is a really good base for games like this, and the renderings are nice and smooth, especially considering the dev probably isn’t working with a high-end PC big team. Pretty good for the current scene standard in 2025, nothing to complain about here.
The soundtrack is fantastic. Games with this amount of music and sound effects for every scene make the immersion really strong. Great choices for the right moments.
Now let’s wrap it up.
(Contains mild spoilers)
The writing has a few issues that, given the quality of the renders and soundtrack, I honestly didn’t expect.
First, Olivia’s hair changes color for a while after the protagonist’s coma—from black to light brown, then back to black again. I know this isn’t a priority right now since fixing it would take time that could be better spent progressing the story, so that’s fine. I’m just mentioning it because it breaks a bit of consistency, even if it’s just a rendering issue.
When writing a story with a mysterious tone, it’s important to tread carefully. You can easily overuse mystery or fail to create real tension. In this visual novel, I think it’s slightly overused—not a big deal, though. You can really feel the protagonist’s point of view: he doesn’t know much and feels weak for the mission he’s carrying, which works well. But when some of the mysteries start to reveal themselves, the earlier tension doesn’t linger as strongly as it could.
The russian choice: the 10th choice in the game is in russian, please correct it.
If I had to give it a score based on my experience with around forty games, I’d say 9.2 out of 10.
I appreciate your short review, and it convinced me to download the game and give it a try so thank you :D
Is this game finished now or there's more update to come?