another great update, really enjoying how the story is going right now. Kept my attention and love seeing Kali being a bit more soft. Don't really understand some of the hate this AVN gets but anyways keep up the great work.
I've played this game before. The game is fantastic and amazing. The only downside is the lack of sound effects during the interactions. It's like a silent movie. Why don't you add sound effects?
Hey, I just started, and I'm a bit confused about something. We're told that the operation in al-Zahira was twenty years ago. Olivia was there. But the character sheet lists Olivia's age as "32". What gives? Obviously Olivia wasn't a special forces operative at 12. Is this just a mistake or am I missing something?
Hi, the game is so good and the story is interesting. But I have a suggestion, add a walkthrough a download section so we can have all the scenes hehe thankyou..
Difficult? Come on, that’s putting it mildly. It’s total garbage. I recommend playing it again in a month, I’ve tried to fix those issues in next update, from start till the end.
I was trying to be diplomatic. XD But I'm glad you recognize the issue. If things are getting reworked a bit, I'll be glad to give this another shot when the time comes.
Finished 0.4 and i must say, 10/10. And that ending... chills and wtf. HIGHLY recommend everyone to enjoy this masterpiece.
But i do have a question that is proabaly a spoiler for other people. so steer clear!
At the part where you choose betweem miriel or lora and olivia, I did the miriel route, then i put on skip to just quickly check the difference doing lora nad olivia route. And it seems they are vastly different, so my question is. Will they link up or be completely different?
Hey I just started playing the game and I have a question about the clearance system. Its based off of the greek alphabet right? If so is it supposed to go alphabetically with each letter being lower down the alphabet being a higher rank? If so Σ should be between Λ and Ψ as in the greek alphabet thats its position.
Maybe an odd question to ask, but is there any sort of expansion elements in the story? This VN got added to another Itch users' expansion game playlist. I've been enjoying the story, but it's been burning in the back of my mind. There's a render of Astoria in the game page here that makes her look like she has ultra-thick thighs, but I don't know if she always has those and we just don't see them in Chapter 1 because she's behind the desk during the interview.
Also a quick bug report: On your first mission in the city when you have a chance to intervene in Lily's attack, the choices are still in Cyrillic instead of English.
This game is incredible bro . I fell in love with the story and i just started playing. Also love ur sense of humor dev. I shit my pants when the game said my name lol
About half way into the game, not much of a visual novel guy but honestly better than expected, came for a nut but i actually got pretty invested into the game. Great job developer!!
The absolute worst game I ever tried. The story is so stupid and convoluted. The author doesn't have a clue what he's writing: action, lewd, horror, sci-fi, fantasy... If the only fiction you ever consumed was bad Chuck Norris movies, you still should be able to come up with something less dumb than this one. It's all over the place with no logic whatsoever. The s3x scenes are unnatural, they don't follow at all from the conversations. And they look bad, the environment is too dark overall.
no compaired to alot of these games and lets just say i have alot since i have almost 3T of these type of games you actually have a great story. people like sinoza just want to fap and thats it, ive seen him on other pages that dont have fap scenes every 3 minutes complaining to but the ones with the scenes he never once complains just gives propes and half the time the story is shit and boring.. you actually have a nice story.
It's funny you've seen my account on other pages since this was the very first time I actually made an account with the intention to leave a comment. The best games are the ones that have a really good story. Eternum, Hail Dicktator, Sisterly Lust (bad game to play because it's old and has no animations, but the story is good), Isekai Paradise, Pale Carnations, Ripples - just to give some examples of really good games.
ngl the writing at the beginning of chapter 4 is very rough, who is talking to who? The characters cut each other off and start new sentences and they don't flow into each other. Its like an ai wrote all of this tbh.
Hey just stumbled upon your game, and have to say I haven't been so immersed in a VN in a long time. The story telling is phenomenal and seeing everything unravel in a deep, intricate plot is something I personally love. Maybe it's a lack of experience from me not playing enough games in the genre, but hearing such immersive audio and a switch from a story perspective to a short video is something I found interesting and unique. One very small issue I had was in certain parts of the english gameplay, a couple of text were shown in russian or didn't show up at all. Not sure if this was intentional or if my device is acting up. Overall amazing story and can't wait for the next update!
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Amazing work so far! The cinematography and modelling really stands out compared to others in the genre.
another great update, really enjoying how the story is going right now. Kept my attention and love seeing Kali being a bit more soft. Don't really understand some of the hate this AVN gets but anyways keep up the great work.
Story a bit confusing sometimes, but overall still loved it
Hey, I just started, and I'm a bit confused about something. We're told that the operation in al-Zahira was twenty years ago. Olivia was there. But the character sheet lists Olivia's age as "32". What gives? Obviously Olivia wasn't a special forces operative at 12. Is this just a mistake or am I missing something?
she 39, forgot to change it in her profile
Oh man I've lost my Proggress when I Updated
is this fempov or malepov or either?
Male
Nice!
what is the song that goes like "
if i fall i dont forget let it go let it rolla i dont need your self controlla" is it ai music?
does the game have chinese?
Hi, the game is so good and the story is interesting. But I have a suggestion, add a walkthrough a download section so we can have all the scenes hehe thankyou..
This pacing is...difficult to follow. I'm sure there's an interesting story here, but I can't process it the way it's being presented.
Difficult? Come on, that’s putting it mildly. It’s total garbage. I recommend playing it again in a month, I’ve tried to fix those issues in next update, from start till the end.
I was trying to be diplomatic. XD But I'm glad you recognize the issue. If things are getting reworked a bit, I'll be glad to give this another shot when the time comes.
the story is very interesting, but to be honest? i dont really like the sex scenes. i usually click through them until the story continues
Interesting world, jarring storytelling and pacing that will leave you asking "wait what just happened, did I skip something?"
Finished 0.4 and i must say, 10/10. And that ending... chills and wtf. HIGHLY recommend everyone to enjoy this masterpiece.
But i do have a question that is proabaly a spoiler for other people. so steer clear!
At the part where you choose betweem miriel or lora and olivia, I did the miriel route, then i put on skip to just quickly check the difference doing lora nad olivia route. And it seems they are vastly different, so my question is. Will they link up or be completely different?
best game good taste music this absolute cinema
为什么中文不能用了，很期待故事情节，希望能更新中文翻译
Are there multiple endings?
Spanish?
Hey I just started playing the game and I have a question about the clearance system. Its based off of the greek alphabet right? If so is it supposed to go alphabetically with each letter being lower down the alphabet being a higher rank? If so Σ should be between Λ and Ψ as in the greek alphabet thats its position.
why android cant download the game
Maybe an odd question to ask, but is there any sort of expansion elements in the story? This VN got added to another Itch users' expansion game playlist. I've been enjoying the story, but it's been burning in the back of my mind. There's a render of Astoria in the game page here that makes her look like she has ultra-thick thighs, but I don't know if she always has those and we just don't see them in Chapter 1 because she's behind the desk during the interview.
Also a quick bug report: On your first mission in the city when you have a chance to intervene in Lily's attack, the choices are still in Cyrillic instead of English.
This game is incredible bro . I fell in love with the story and i just started playing. Also love ur sense of humor dev. I shit my pants when the game said my name lol
Ps: make a playlist of the soundtrack, its fire
i want japanese type gmaes
About half way into the game, not much of a visual novel guy but honestly better than expected, came for a nut but i actually got pretty invested into the game. Great job developer!!
Hmm 🧐 may wish too rewrite that sentence. Came for a Nut? 😝 🥜 🥜
How far do I have to go in for the actual like, lewd shit?
i need the music in my playlist
The absolute worst game I ever tried. The story is so stupid and convoluted. The author doesn't have a clue what he's writing: action, lewd, horror, sci-fi, fantasy... If the only fiction you ever consumed was bad Chuck Norris movies, you still should be able to come up with something less dumb than this one. It's all over the place with no logic whatsoever. The s3x scenes are unnatural, they don't follow at all from the conversations. And they look bad, the environment is too dark overall.
The story is pretty straightforward ngl. This sounds like a you problem
the characters are brain dead. they make really poor decisions.
Thank you for opinion :D
Overall, I can agree, my story can be confused, but story it's very common and simple. But anyway, seems like this story not for everyone. :)
no compaired to alot of these games and lets just say i have alot since i have almost 3T of these type of games you actually have a great story. people like sinoza just want to fap and thats it, ive seen him on other pages that dont have fap scenes every 3 minutes complaining to but the ones with the scenes he never once complains just gives propes and half the time the story is shit and boring.. you actually have a nice story.
It's funny you've seen my account on other pages since this was the very first time I actually made an account with the intention to leave a comment. The best games are the ones that have a really good story. Eternum, Hail Dicktator, Sisterly Lust (bad game to play because it's old and has no animations, but the story is good), Isekai Paradise, Pale Carnations, Ripples - just to give some examples of really good games.
Lovely, will add later other choice.
? thats a weird way to say you dont like the game. imagine you quit a job because you dont like someone who works there. weird as hell
What's wrong with her? I' might play this game so I want to know if it's worth dumping hours into reading
Which of the files should I download GD, GoFile or Mega ?
They all the same, so just use one which you prefer.
Why is there no Chinese in version 0.4 now?Will there be Chinese in the future?
I need translator for this. If i found someone than sure, if not... well, than no xD
The PC zip on the GD says "quota has been reached for this file" so we can't download it
Will upload to another platform
I Have Drama about this
GOAT
ngl the writing at the beginning of chapter 4 is very rough, who is talking to who? The characters cut each other off and start new sentences and they don't flow into each other. Its like an ai wrote all of this tbh.
It is, how it is. Thx for your opinion :D
I downloaded the 0.4 version but after having played 0.3.5 it doesn't 'play' the new version after the 3.5 credits?
Decide to continue first choice. Elf choice (Miriel) will be in the future update.
Ah ok sorry I may have forgot that there was an impactful choice before, well I will gladly wait. It still is an amazing game!
LETS FUCKING GOOOOOO
Do you plan to add Spanish?
Yes, if I found Spanish trasnlator
wow,its a very nice game.
Hey just stumbled upon your game, and have to say I haven't been so immersed in a VN in a long time. The story telling is phenomenal and seeing everything unravel in a deep, intricate plot is something I personally love. Maybe it's a lack of experience from me not playing enough games in the genre, but hearing such immersive audio and a switch from a story perspective to a short video is something I found interesting and unique. One very small issue I had was in certain parts of the english gameplay, a couple of text were shown in russian or didn't show up at all. Not sure if this was intentional or if my device is acting up. Overall amazing story and can't wait for the next update!