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Is anyone else having an issue where you can't download the new update? I keep getting File Not Found after completing the download.

The experience of 0.2 is good, I will continue to pay attention to you,I believe you will achieve the success you desire.  加油!

Hi I'm currently trying to give this a chance but it has an error message, in chase you still see that today I wanted to take the chance and ask what like you need or how to copy that for you.
The last time i was already asked for an error code or whatever.

What error? Can you send a screen?

sadly no i closed it yesterday, it was somewhere around the time the girl had a psycho moment with her doubleganger.

actually you can just ignore that. It`s just too line of code, thats all. Already fixed that, but need wait for update in the next week.

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First, I want to say thank you to the author and I can see the hard work you have put in. I have been reading/editing SF for over 60 years. 

However, I also want to say this is one of the most confusing games I have ever played. The back in forth to future, earth and within the game itself makes it very hard to understand. I understand the "dark scenes" are to give it drama, but at least on my computer many of the underground scenes are so dark can't see much of the action. 

No, I wasn't expecting living with your Landlady/sisters etc. type of game. That is why I went into playing this. I know you have done if for love/enjoyment and I can appreciate that. I do think you have the makings of some good story elements here-- but so much confusion is thrown into the mix. I would have suggested sticking to two or three elements and running with that. 

Actually, I have played through the choices, and some do matter. Saving the girl in the alley matters, helping certain people pick up the dialogue later. 

I have played the latest release, and will continue to play, I can't just let a story go and wish you well and hope you continue to expand your universe. 

I hope you don't mind this review-- again, some good positive elements-- still don't know what "updating memory" means. The list of girls still is not clearly understood and I am assuming the Codex will be fleshed out in future sessions. However, you might want to put some instructions/hints to start off with so people don't feel like they have missed something. 

Good luck and thanks for the game. 

regards 

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Thank you for your feedback, I really enjoyed hearing it. And I totally agree with you, I decided to create too big a universe that takes a lot element into story, and tried to explain it all in some measly couple of chapters.


In general, in the future I'll make the story much clearer and more elaborated, but now I'm trying to redo the first chapter, to explain the elementary things to the player by showing what and how .


And thank you for your time, I wish you all the best of luck 😁

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Are you actually in like ur 70s or did I read that wrong?

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Sorry if that surprises or bothers you :-) . But us old retired guys like to play non-shoot them up games also. I have never been able to do the quick reflex or scrolling fight games. However, as I said in my review, love Sci-Fi books like Heinlein and Drake, even E.E Doc Smith so this type of game attracts me. Something along the lines Tales from...., Wartribe Academy, Eternium with good stories and some fun erotic side make it nice. Lucky Paradox is another "weird one" that has been progressing along. If you want, I will name a few of the other ones I play (sorry long answer to your post). 

 I also got into Steam, and have played or am playing games like Villains Legacy (superhero parody), City of Broken Dreams was a great one although prefer harem endings if it follows the game play.  However, games are not the only thing I do in retirement, mentor a bunch of international students that I worked with, along with Tennis and Fishing when yard work allows. hahahahahha--- sorry-- long winded as usual. But thanks for asking. 

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I see you have excellent taste in the genre monsieur :D

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Im glad to hear your so active in your golden years.

I gotta say though, because its in my nature to be contrary... I HATE Eternum. Even the name is a massive turn off for me.

You want an example of 'Illusion of Choice', thats Eternum. Add in Dev times of over 6 months and a Dev that doesn't like to respond to negative feedback and yeah, I will lose my temper.

Believe it or not I think NoGlory here is a better Dev than Caribdis, if only because he actually spoke to me about my concerns. Didn't just ignore and then block me.

Not to mention this story is fairly original, as in I have not read anything like it. Similar yes but not the same.

Eternum on the other hand is a rip off of 'Ready Player One'. It just has Pornography thrown in...

Lastly just to throw my hat in the Old Man ring, I'm 50 myself.

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On a more positive note my favorite AVNs include: Crimson High, Project: Passion, A Foreign World and Genex Love.

Project: Passion is GOATed

nah its cool was js surprising yk

that's honestly so cool to hear, may I ask what do you mentor students on? I know it might be too personal but curiosity gets the best of me pretty easily

I worked in SE Asia for a few years working on food safety and food security projects. I started helping some of the students that I encountered during my work and it kind of kept up after retirement. Then picked up some students from other countries. I really work on soft skills, English communication, some critical thinking (which is not emphasized in Asia as a whole), helping through under graduate school with how to study, multi-task etc. Its been fun working with the young adults and keeps me sharp. Hope that gives you and idea. 

thank you for the detailed response, it definitely gave me a good idea. Sounds like you found a passion in helping others,  a most noble cause :). I love hearing of older (no offense) people helping us younger folk, I feel like experience makes the best teachers and elders aren't respected as much as they should be - in most cases. Anyway, rambled a bit, thank you for satisfying my curiosity!

hey this came out every time i use my old save file from 0.1, and  if i press ignore the game just start a new game and tell me to give a name, is that anyway to fix it?

Looks like I'm not the only one. Details see: https://itch.io/post/12691422

If you using old saves from 0.1, and not from 0.1.5 than saves wouldn’t works, unfortunately 🥲

Ohh so thats why,is ok I just started a new game😂cause I really like this game,btw the gallery didn't show up the new h scene in 0.2 is that normal?

No, it`s not normal xD which version you using? Chinese or English?

Chinese , i still can find the 0.1 h scene in gallery tho is just dont show the new one

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Another AVN that offers meaningless choices.

All of it boils down to: ‘Do ya wanna see some tits?’

I’d kill or die to see a story that actually includes choices that matter! Choices that change the story! 

Hell even choices that are reflected in the story make a difference!

For example: If I refuse to spend any time with a girl as the MC she should get angry, leave forever, that sort of stuff.

But that would take more effort than these so called writers can be bothered with…

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İf you are looking for a game that choices matter I suggest you Ravager its a really good game.

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You mean the one with the Dragon MC?

Ive played it, yes is has meaningful choices. You can slaughter NPCs if you want and it removes them from the story, never to be seen again...

Its not bad but a little to rapey for my tastes.

I'd like to see something similar in terms of meaningful choices but much less Dragon Hentai.

As in: None.

Yes, and unfortunately the effort spent on it is not proportional to the earnings. I can't devote all my time to the game, because I have my main job.

About the choice. There are a few choice here and there, which affect the story, and yet there are choice that..... Let's just say they have almost no impact. Why almost? Because there are consequences to such actions. But later :D

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So its about the earnings, not the art as usual. I'm not surprised.

Personally I think if money is what you want, dont be an artist. Dont even try. It rarely pays. Thats one of the first things I was taught when I studied literature.

But if its art you want, to uplift the human spirit. To make us more than beasts, accept that its not about the money and make the sacrifices your art requires.

My advice to you, not that I think you'll care or listen to me, is stick to your job. 

Maybe you will have time for art when you have reached retirement age.

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Back to the lack of choices again: I'm sorry I didn't see any meaningful choices when I played through it all. 

I remember a choice to stop and help some girl in an alley, which I chose to ignore. No consequences to be seen. Therefore meaningless.

The same with some Elf girl getting stomped later, no consequences and never mentioned again.

I refused every single romantic or sexual advance any of the female characters made in the story. 

None of them did anything about it. There may have been one brief comment about 'not looking at any of them' but then there was also a comment about the MC being a pervert when I had been anything but while controlling the MC.

Shouldn't the dialogue reflect my choices as MC? Shouldn't the girl that came with him from earth, I forget her name because I didn't care about her, shouldn't she loose her temper at being rejected?

Shouldn't the hacker chick have done or said something to get back at the MC when I refused to let her join him in the bath? 

Perhaps she should have started screaming at him? Accused him of rape of something? Tried to ruin his reputation?

A lot of women really dont like being rejected afterall.

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None of these things had any visible effect on the story, positive or negative. 

No one left, no one grew angry or disappointed. 

No one realized they were wrong and grew as a person.

No one of consequence died. In fact the only character I remember dying at all was literally called 'Soldier C' or something.

If I cant see the consequences of my actions, even if its because you just haven't gotten around to writing that part of the story yet, then there are no consequences. 

Therefore none of it has any meaning for me.

Rant over.

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For a minute, I've been working around the clock for a notional $30 a month for six months now. If I really planned to do it for the money, I would have given it up a long time ago. Yes and, the way I chose is not exactly easy, yes much easier to create a game with a conventional stepmother, and 3 sisters who live in the same house and crazy about the main character. But I wanted something more, something I wouldn't be ashamed of in the future. 

And I'm honestly a little bit offended to see that elections don't affect anything, when in turn, they do. But on the other hand, I also understand you, because unfortunately I simply do not have not only time and energy, but also mind to combine all this. But thank you for your feedback, and I promise that in the future I will make much better choices than what I have now. Because if you look at it from your point of view, then yes, there are no elections, they are there, but at the same time they are not.... Sad but true.

Hi, I've a few problems with the new 0.2 PC release. Am I the only one?

First, when loading any save from 0.1 (tried with "save now" end, and other saves), I get a missing PNG-Error (Full Traceback omitted):

While loading <renpy.display.im.Image object ('gui/GALLERY0.png') at 0x000000000c185190>:
  File "renpy/common/00action_file.rpy", line 499, in __call__
    renpy.load(fn)
Exception: Couldn't find a place to stop rolling back. Perhaps the script changed in an incompatible way?

Second, when placing a blank PNG in the folder, the Error changes a little:

While running game code:
  File "renpy/common/00action_file.rpy", line 499, in __call__
    renpy.load(fn)
Exception: Couldn't find a place to stop rolling back. Perhaps the script changed in an incompatible way?
Third, I tried a new game with intention to skip through. But while meeting Anya and Olivia (first time in bar after Anyas BJ) I get a new Error when Anya is talking with her twin:

While running game code:
Exception: Sayer 'cc' is not defined.
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
  File "script.rpyc", line 2186, in script
Is ignoreable as "cc" doesn't say much. But so many Errors just at the start is a little demoralizing. Who knows what else might come up. 

Can anybody acknowledge or deny my problems with his version?

first two seems kinda strange, last one I`m agree it`s the problem and i fixed this one.

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Hi NoGlory, thanks for quick reply. Looks like I'm not the only one with the issue: https://itch.io/post/12696784 If there is anything I can do to help you debugging, please let me know. I've uploaded my save from version 0.1 (where it says to save now - see screenshot) at: https://gofile.io/d/u0zKtQ


And by the way, i really liked your story and appreciate your adult characters and setting. No cliche Story. And your dedication and efforts to little details like making so many renders for every moving scene is also worth mentioning.

Lovely, glad to hear about this. Second, do you played 0.1.5? Or you played first 0.1? Cause different between them is.... Saves from 0.1 not works correctly in 0.2, unfortunately i changed a lot stuff in the first chapter that was a reason

Was definetly 0.1 and not 0.1.5. I finished 0.1 on 6 January, but 0.1.5 came out afterwards and was just a rewrite. So i didn't bother to replay it (just a few days later). And i store the played version as comment in my collection, so I know in the future where i need to continue. But good to know that 0.1 saves are not compatible. I suggest you write a big hint in your frontpage for other poor souls like me. ;-)

Yeah, I agree. I'll write this just in time for 0.2.5, it should be available by the end of next week. And in the future, if saves don't work, I'll add a skip function where you just have to select variables. Lovely :D

Hi, I have a problem with the game´s download, what can I do?? 

it`s... What program it is?

The itchio Desktop app

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After downloading the game it doesn't start and gives this error

This means that you have not downloaded the file all the way to the end, or the file is corrupted. The only solution is to re-download. And unfortunately this is the only solution, because from my side all files uploaded to file exchangers work correctly

Thank you for your answer. In general, I sometimes experience such problems. When I download it again, the same problem occurs. That's why I uninstalled the Winrar program and started using 7zip. I will try this game once more for your suggestion. Good luck in life.



hey look at that I found gold! Not refined gold like a statue or something but like a gold nugget. Not perfect in shape or size but valuable nonetheless.


lets see...


1. art? Damn near breathtaking from the models to the scenery everything is crafted beautifully. 


2. story?  So far it's really good and there are definitely Mysteries to still in comfort of course since it's considered in the early days of development still. I'm really enjoying the setting and had actually recently been wanting to read a story that is a blend of fantasy futuristic as well cyberpunk genre.


3. The sexy scenes certainly are sexy and well animated. Aside from another character that I won't spoil here would really like the next intimate encounter be with a character that we the players have felt like we have built up a bond with over time.


4. Is more of a bad one but being an alien world at such a distant place it really breaks the immersion every time I see English. As far as I could tell so far a lower reason hasn't been given I'm guessing it's more to do with the assets at hand to build the world. But seeing Coca-Cola cans or certain someone holding a High School of the Dead manga makes me go.... " is this really not earth?"



So in conclusion aside from my number four I definitely would give this one a look even if it's early days. I mean come on how many early visual novels do you find with this much stuff early on??? You don't normally it's simple you could get the grasp of it in a few minutes but there's plenty of stuff here even though this is only the second installment of the story. In other words definitely download this one.

I cant seem to download the game at all for PC here on itchio or from google drive or the alternative, any help would be great.

is there a Chinese translation?

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In Chinese version must be

On Linux in script.rpy line 3 the following code causes a crash.  I extracted the rpa and commented this out and it works now. Maybe just leave this out in the next version.

`#user_name = os.getlogin()

Thanks

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For now seems like it works, for future, I'll be making the android version more compact

Okie dokie. 🤪

Hello author, I have adjusted the language of this game to Chinese but did not translate it into Chinese in the game. I hope you can solve this problem.I hope you can see this message and respond to me.Thank you

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我会尽量在今天结束前修复它,但我不能保证,因为新版本没有翻译,旧脚本也不知消失到哪里去了。但我会尽力而为。给您带来的不便,我深表歉意。

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Why when I download from Google documents apk en does not download, it says internal error and I can not download, please fix or help

do you tried download game from other source? Like pixeldrain or GoFile?

No, but I know that it works there, it's just why they left Google Docs that doesn't work

When I open it exit me from the game?

PC or android? If android, than unfortunatelly, I can`t fixed that cause Idk what problem with that :(

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This is an awesome game, I love the writing style. Thank you very much, and I can't wait for more 

Glad to hear that :D

I extremely appreciate and love the vibe this game brings... So far this is gonna have 8/10 overall... And also, if possible, can you add a feature "hide" where the texts will be hidden exposing the whole image? Still, great... Looking forward for the next update...

Thanks so much :D

there's a part of the game where the narrator keeps on repeating image s1bbb2 not found repeatedly even after it's over and it's really annoying

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Thx, will fix that.

any idea how long that will take because I don't want to continue playing until it's fixed but the games been really good so far

Tbh, I checked this, and.... There`s nothing, I mean it`s works good. Can I ask which version do you downloaded?

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version 1.0

lovely

fixed, but for this needs wait a little more, cause it would be only in 0.2 :(

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After i play the gameplay still to boring.

About storyline quite good.

About Scene you give your own opinion cause different ppl has different taste.

That's all in my opinion thx.

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Thx for you opinion :D

About gameplay... Yeah I`m agree, it can be boring, but that`s the reason I`m added feature to skip this "Minigames".

About story, it`s the main aspect here, so glad to hear than you like it. (At least don't turn the game off right after it starts.) xD

And for the scene, would be appreciated to hear more about scene from your opinion.

For, I'm always interested to hear every player's opinions and what they think about it :D

So does the game just end when the 'world is sacrificed'? Bc that is where the game ended for me.

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toothpaste

Yeah it is, unfortunately :(

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Awesome game, can't wait for future updates.

Thanks :D

I want to ask, when playing with Android, how to quit after opening the upper left corner of the game to see the role, and I can't find the exit button.

Cause seems like I forgot to add this feature to this menu... Sorry for that :(

Pixeldrain download continuously pops up with an execute error. Went to download from google drive but it won't allow me to download because too many others have downloaded the file.

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On release 0.2 I will add more file exchangers

问温访温法无都全接链

I see NIKKE Alice in photos. I download.

I see you have good taste sir :D

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doesnt continue after age verification pls fix(pc)

Fixed, but need wait for 0.2 :(

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Strange, it won't execute on my PC. I'll try again later...

Sad to hear than, will see what can be problem for that.

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Um Lili hacking bitch showing my PC name lmfao

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likely sourced from our operating systems account details.
the real question is, why are our operating systems giving software access to that sensitive information? 

Windows never considered the pcname to be sensitive information.

From my knowledge of programming, every computer has a log file with some basic information about the computer (I believe called environment variables) that is available even without admin access.

i would have expected the "PC name" to be available information, mine is called "DESKTOP-ksjdhbfak" or something like that, not my real first name, i certainly would not have expected the windows account sign-in username to be visible to anything except Microsoft..it just goes to show, i learn something new every year.

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Here is a tip Never post your error report of any game in any chats because this report also shows all your cp info. Sample on Eternum player John some thing posted his errors report. Now everyone has his info. And any blackmailer could use this against you. I will not  go into detail how a hacker/blackmailer can do this.  Just be careful every thing you do in the cyber world is being seen by someone and they could try to use it against you for profit or just to hurt you. 

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no bro, there is nothing potentially compromising in a renpy error report.
yes there is CP info, but nothing that could be specifically used to hack you that wouldnt otherwise take a 1in3 guess..

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Something is up with the game. It stuck in legal age confirmation page, if I press Yes nothing happens just hangs. No - quits of course. I use PC version.

I fixed this problem, must work in new version. If no, than pls dm in discord, would be appreciated.

For a new vn it looks amazing has a great story and I think it would do well on Steam

Thanks so much :)

Itch app is saying that there is no installer for this and i cant download it

Cause, idk how to upload a game to the itch app tbh. Will try to do that, but only after 0.2.  So sorry, but need wait a little more for that.

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Before even talking about the story, the Actual loading screen for the game when you boot it up.. That is one of the best ones for any V/N game i've seen.. Legit thought i accidently started up Elite danger or something lol.. NOW the story.. has good writing, tits and nice asses. What's more to say? Seriously 9/10 keep it up hope to see this project get the love it deserves.

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Wow, thanks so much. You are the first guy (or girl) who mention this, and I`m really happy to hear than my labour has not been in vain. :D

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I tried running the game but it crashed with this error message

"I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:

  File "game/script.rpy", line 3, in <module>

OSError: [Errno 6] No such device or address"


I downloaded the pc version and am running it on linux

Seems like problem with my build. Will try to fix that, and upload today. 

interesting game

Thanks, and glad than you enjoyed :D

I downloaded the mac version, but it crashed upon launch.

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Still trying to understand what problem with that, planned to upload a little fix today for mac users, but still not sure if it would work or no.

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I'll try and get back to you!

EDIT: It works!

AMAZING!

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DUUUUUUUUUUDE THIS IS AWESOME, screwing the cat girl and elf girl (i forgot their names) need to be possibilities in the future

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Thanks so much, glad than you liked :D (And for sure it would be, but need wait a little bit more.)

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