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Rework? 0.1.5
And hello again, long time no see, right?
Well, I'll get straight to the point. After reading all your comments and feedback that you provided me, I decided to fix all the pressing issues for version 0.1 before moving forward.
I reworked several scenes at the beginning of the game, as well as during the game itself. I added more details here and there, improved transitions, developed the characters better, tried to enhance the pacing of the narrative, and so on.
The result... 12,000 rewritten words, 700 reworked renders, and new videos here and there.
I hope that playing this version will be much more enjoyable than before. And now, with a clear conscience, I am proceeding with the development of version 0.2.
P.S. If you find any errors (hopefully you won’t), please let me know via private messages on Discord.
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Everything in this update is awesome! The only thing I wish was different...was the weird..."tongue battling" between MC and Ivy. It was so jarring to see, and definitely...not how a grown man should be kissing a woman lol
Im ngl i gotta download it now just so i can see it. I love a good funny scene.
Played the rework for a bit yesterday but today I got this
Android? Where do you download this? mega? Gd? Pixel?
Android mega, don't like Google or pixel
Ok, strange, cause tho than i fixed this one, will see what can be a problem
I have not heard from you since my issue report 2 weeks ago. Decided to try the Google download for Android but still unable to load the game.
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I'm sorry, but errors were detected in your script. Please correct the
errors listed below, and try again.
File "game/00iconbutton.rpy", line 42: expected a keyword argument or child statement.
0 icon style "iconbutton_icon" properties icon_properties
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Ren'Py Version: Ren'Py 8.3.4.24120703
Thu Feb 6 00:13:10 2025
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Ended up starting a new game
Ohhh you reworked it ok fam definitely going to check it again, thank you for the hard work as always :D
Ugh, Googledrive exceeded its qouta and mega froze at 1.2gbs. Looks like I'm out of downloading
Few minute, upload in pixeldrain
awesome! Not sure whats up with mega as of late, last fee game downloads ended up with similar situations.
Googledrive however, never have been able to download anything using it. Its always a quota issues.
Once I get home, I’ll start the download! Thank you!
stop listening to haters, stop second guessing yourself.
has no one told you that reworks are what kills games? in my 10+ years experience on this site (no, this is not my first account), its reworks that lead to never-ending cycle of "gotta fix it" and it leads to abandoned games cos no one, including yourself,. will ever be 100% happy with it.
as long as the game plays without errors, and the spelling is not atrocious, its good enough.no one is perfect, and you will not be the first. you cant please everyone, dont even try.
it will kill your game
Lovely, and I know, but the criticism was really good, because as it is, the beginning is the main component to familiarize yourself with the game, and since quite a few players told me that nothing was clear, I decided to fix that. In the future, I don't plan on pulling this kind of thing again. (I hope xD).
And, it didn't affect the release date, or the development of 0.2, so all in favor :D
lol maybe they were a bit daft. i actually didn't see any glaring issues, and i am very critical of stupidity and nonsense .. the beginning was a bit abrupt and mary-sue'ish, but there was nothing wrong with it
Wait what?
I havent played the game yet but wanted to.
I just looked and you want to tell me, you actually redid 12k words and 700 renders in 20 days? as of release of 0.1.
Man thats astonishing and concerning, I admire the drive but please dont overwork yourself. That could lead to a burnout.
To clarify I just compare the update times of other games with similar quality, which take a lot more time.
So I wish the dev much success and that they keep themselves healthy.
Thanks so much for this, but unfortunately, if not doing this fast, than people just forget about you :D
Big game changer! Thank you for all your hard work, game dev
Thanks!
this is a great game， the female characters inside match my aesthetic.and Does the 0.15 version still work with the 0.1 version Chinese patch? I am Chinese, but I don't want to play with machine-translated AI.
I'm not sure, to be honest, probably not, or it'll work half the time.
Alright, I'll wait for the 0.2 version to come out before I play it.Keep it up, you'll make it!
Do we have to replay through everything in 0.1.5 or will saves from 0.1 work in 0.2?
yeah, save must work, so if you not played 0.1.5, you still can use your save from 0.1
good work
Thanks!